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The Script

 -Scene one: non-diegetic sound, diegetic sound

-Scene two: car alarm going off, increasingly gets louder. Simona shuts car alarm off. Simona places keys on the counter. Car alarm goes off again. Simona gets up to shut off car alarm again. Keys hit the counter.

-Scene three: Simona eats a piece of toast, playing music in her ears. Music drowns out, heavy breathing noises is introduced.

-Scene four: simona is on the phone with her friend. “Hey how are you doing, yeah the house is great. I’m kinda just paranoid you know, it’s been a while since I’ve lived on my own.” Other character: “yeah girl, I would love too, I’ll come by tomorrow to check it out and give you company.” Simona: “yeah, I would love that, it feels as if I’m not alone.. but like I said, probably paranoid” Simona hangs up the phone.

-Scene five: noises of  boxes being moved, sweeping sound. Knocking sound appears at the door. Simonas footsteps increase as she opens the door. “HEYYYY, wow it’s really nice in here” “haha thanks girl, I have some fruit laid out near the pool, let’s go change” 

-Scene six: sound of girls at the pool, laughter. Knife noise occurs. 

-Scene seven: girls talking. Simona: “Thank you for coming by Eva, I really needed this, you know hard it’s been these past few months for me, I’m glad you came by.” Eva: “ofc girl, you know I always have your back, and this house is beautiful, you have paradise beneath your feet, if I were you I would never leave.” Simona: “haha yeah, I guess I gotta get used to the house, it’s all so new to me. Hm that’s weird, I could have sworn all the knives were in that knife holder. Whatever it’s probably nothing.”

Eva: “girl you probably misplaced it, anyways I’m gonna head out, you know how mark gets when I come home late.” Simona “yeah yeah! Let me walk you out” Eva: “ bye Simo, I’ll see you soon. Simona: “goodnight Eva, drive safe." Sound of front door closing.

Scene eight: sound of lights being switched off. Simona hears crash outside. Balcony door opens, then closes. Another sound is made from outside. Balcony lock sound occurs. Phone call ringing being made. Simona: “Eva, I think I’m not alone, I knew I wasn’t crazy, I’m pretty sure there’s someone outside.. I don’t wanna go out there alone, can you stay on the phone with me.” Eva: “Simo, you know mark hates it when I get home late , are you sure it’s not just the neighbors?” Simona: “I don’t know Eva, just stay on the phone with me while I check.” Eva: “okay I’ll put you on my CarPlay”

Scene 9: balcony door opens, Simona: “okay I’m outside, I think I see something in the pool” Eva: “I don’t know about this Simo, just get back inside, check tomorrow.” *silence* *sound of stab* *Simona scream* eva: “SIMONA, ARE YOU THERE ? ARE YOU OKAY? SIMONA ANSWER ME OR IM CALLING 911. I SWEAR TO GOD IF THIS A JOKE SIMO IM GONNA KILL YOU” *sound of simona falling in the pool * *silence*

Scene 10: “Simona I’m calling 911.”



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